The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

I think the first part was delegated to Louisa, since we decided to keep the pattern. If we did choose to write in that order, then I'd be doing the part where Arabelle meets with Wyatt.

Louisa....where are you?!?!?

That works! Then we just need to decide what Arabelle does after Wyatt.

Tourterelle wrote:

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

I think the first part was delegated to Louisa, since we decided to keep the pattern. If we did choose to write in that order, then I'd be doing the part where Arabelle meets with Wyatt.

Louisa....where are you?!?!?

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

Now we need to figure out where we were.

That sounded funny...

Solveig wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Okay, let's get to work! *cracks whip*

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That gave me da lolz!

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Psht, don't you mean the shivers? I know I scared everybody!

Tourterelle wrote:

Okay, let's get to work! *cracks whip*

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That gave me da lolz!

Okay, let's get to work! *cracks whip*

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Yeah. She's in my contacts. I extended the question. We'll still wait?

My bad. Still, that bugs me; the answer is a grand total of two words long, and it should be "you're."

Nah, I don't see why we should; I don't think we'll get another answer.

Nah, it's okay. She's someone from Polls & Surveys.

So which will we pick? The 2nd answer or the 3rd one? Whose answer helped us more?

Okay, good. *pulls mouth out of foot*

I think the third one was the best answer, and helped us the most.

Done.

Yay!

Now we still have to name Saul's group. Assemblage of _______

I can't think of anything!

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Yeah. She's in my contacts. I extended the question. We'll still wait?

My bad. Still, that bugs me; the answer is a grand total of two words long, and it should be "you're."

Nah, I don't see why we should; I don't think we'll get another answer.

Nah, it's okay. She's someone from Polls & Surveys.

So which will we pick? The 2nd answer or the 3rd one? Whose answer helped us more?

Okay, good. *pulls mouth out of foot*

I think the third one was the best answer, and helped us the most.

Done.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Yeah. She's in my contacts. I extended the question. We'll still wait?

My bad. Still, that bugs me; the answer is a grand total of two words long, and it should be "you're."

Nah, I don't see why we should; I don't think we'll get another answer.

Nah, it's okay. She's someone from Polls & Surveys.

So which will we pick? The 2nd answer or the 3rd one? Whose answer helped us more?

Okay, good. *pulls mouth out of foot*

I think the third one was the best answer, and helped us the most.

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Yeah. She's in my contacts. I extended the question. We'll still wait?

My bad. Still, that bugs me; the answer is a grand total of two words long, and it should be "you're."

Nah, I don't see why we should; I don't think we'll get another answer.

Nah, it's okay. She's someone from Polls & Surveys.

So which will we pick? The 2nd answer or the 3rd one? Whose answer helped us more?

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Yeah. She's in my contacts. I extended the question. We'll still wait?

My bad. Still, that bugs me; the answer is a grand total of two words long, and it should be "you're."

Nah, I don't see why we should; I don't think we'll get another answer.

Tourterelle wrote:

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Yeah. She's in my contacts. I extended the question. We'll still wait?

Did you see the latest response? "Your next"

Can't even be bothered to use the correct "You're." Sheesh.

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Should I pick a Best Answer already? Or will we wait for new answers?

Pick one after today is over...just to check for possible new answers...

Good idea; some of your contacts might answer still.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Should I pick a Best Answer already? Or will we wait for new answers?

Pick one after today is over...just to check for possible new answers...

Should I pick a Best Answer already? Or will we wait for new answers?

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

Ooh, we think alike. I said we should we more specific too.

How about something like this:

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Insert the name of Saul's group here

Ohhh...I like that. All we need to do now is to come up with a name for Saul's group...

Any ideas?

How about Assemblage for England?

As if they really want to improve England rather than just take all the power. That name might not be too mysterious, though.

Do we want a 'very' mysterious name?

Maybe not very; just somewhat.

Eh, we can think on it. Right now I'm going to read, then go to bed.

Goodnight, Zara!

Goodnight, Nicholle. Oh snap...I actually have to get back to work now...

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

Ooh, we think alike. I said we should we more specific too.

How about something like this:

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Insert the name of Saul's group here

Ohhh...I like that. All we need to do now is to come up with a name for Saul's group...

Any ideas?

How about Assemblage for England?

As if they really want to improve England rather than just take all the power. That name might not be too mysterious, though.

Do we want a 'very' mysterious name?

Maybe not very; just somewhat.

Eh, we can think on it. Right now I'm going to read, then go to bed.

Goodnight, Zara!

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

Ooh, we think alike. I said we should we more specific too.

How about something like this:

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Insert the name of Saul's group here

Ohhh...I like that. All we need to do now is to come up with a name for Saul's group...

Any ideas?

How about Assemblage for England?

As if they really want to improve England rather than just take all the power. That name might not be too mysterious, though.

Do we want a 'very' mysterious name?

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

Ooh, we think alike. I said we should we more specific too.

How about something like this:

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Insert the name of Saul's group here

Ohhh...I like that. All we need to do now is to come up with a name for Saul's group...

Any ideas?

How about Assemblage for England?

As if they really want to improve England rather than just take all the power. That name might not be too mysterious, though.

Tourterelle wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

Ooh, we think alike. I said we should we more specific too.

How about something like this:

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Insert the name of Saul's group here

Ohhh...I like that. All we need to do now is to come up with a name for Saul's group...

Any ideas?

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

Ooh, we think alike. I said we should we more specific too.

How about something like this:

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Insert the name of Saul's group here

For the rest of you lazy people out there (jk), here is the answer Simone gave:

dear arabelle,

don't bother about the mess. i'll clean up after i take your head. i figured, why do twice the work?

love, saul

seriously though, i don't know enough about the saul character to write in his voice and you didn't specify what kind of note you want...menacing? misleading? revealing? what about the character motivated him to leave a note at the murder scene? unless the answers to those questions are what you are asking for in your question

We'd need to be more specific, and maybe we could leave the "Love, Saul" part in there, depending on whether Arabelle knows about the existence of her half-brother.

I actually like that! Sinister humor is always fun!

We would have to be more specific, though.