The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas

Sure, we can do that. I don't think Pearl should be that furious, though, considering Arabelle's situation. Maybe a bit irritated?

Let's make Pearl's mother annoying, though. Maybe she could try to act motherly towards Arabelle.

Tourterelle wrote:

Some down time at Pearl's estate, I suppose. Maybe she is found in the park, taken back to Pearl's home, spends the day wallowing in grief, has dinner with Pearl's insensitive mother...

I was thinking that maybe Arabelle would go back to Pearl's house by herself and she'd find Pearl furious and scolding Arabelle for running off like that...

Some down time at Pearl's estate, I suppose. Maybe she is found in the park, taken back to Pearl's home, spends the day wallowing in grief, has dinner with Pearl's insensitive mother...

Okay, what will we do next?

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Done. Whew, sorry it took so long. So many distractions.

I love it!

Only, I don't think they had beeping watches during Victorian times...

Oh, right. I forgot which era we were in.

We'll just edit it out later.

Perhaps he has a pocket watch?

That works. To be honest, trying to maintain the era is hard. I'm a modern girl.

Not for me! I love pretending to be in a different era!

Zara's up next; we all just have to decide what happens next.

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Done. Whew, sorry it took so long. So many distractions.

I love it!

Only, I don't think they had beeping watches during Victorian times...

Oh, right. I forgot which era we were in.

We'll just edit it out later.

Perhaps he has a pocket watch?

That works. To be honest, trying to maintain the era is hard. I'm a modern girl.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Done. Whew, sorry it took so long. So many distractions.

I love it!

Only, I don't think they had beeping watches during Victorian times...

Oh, right. I forgot which era we were in.

We'll just edit it out later.

Perhaps he has a pocket watch?

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Done. Whew, sorry it took so long. So many distractions.

I love it!

Only, I don't think they had beeping watches during Victorian times...

Oh, right. I forgot which era we were in.

We'll just edit it out later.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Done. Whew, sorry it took so long. So many distractions.

I love it!

Only, I don't think they had beeping watches during Victorian times...

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Done. Whew, sorry it took so long. So many distractions.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Sounds good.

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

I'll start writing now.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

Yeah, she's probably okay with that.

Okay! We're good then.

We can probably work on the plot-line while we're writing, I think.

Tourterelle wrote:

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

I second that. And I'm sure Zara's fine with it, too. Maybe we'll have enough time to think up of the name.

I vote we just not include the group's name in the letter. That way, we can just move on with the story and introduce Saul's group's name later.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Or how about the name of the group was smudged with blood? (So Arabelle wouldn't be able to read it)

I like that idea, but wouldn't the letter be inside an envelope?

We could just not include the group name in the letter. More mysterious, I suppose.

I thought it'd make the story more suspenseful if Arabelle played Nancy Drew and tried to find out the name of the group with the little leads.

Pearl and Gus can be George and Bess!

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Or how about the name of the group was smudged with blood? (So Arabelle wouldn't be able to read it)

I like that idea, but wouldn't the letter be inside an envelope?

We could just not include the group name in the letter. More mysterious, I suppose.

I thought it'd make the story more suspenseful if Arabelle played Nancy Drew and tried to find out the name of the group with the little leads.

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Or how about the name of the group was smudged with blood? (So Arabelle wouldn't be able to read it)

I like that idea, but wouldn't the letter be inside an envelope?

We could just not include the group name in the letter. More mysterious, I suppose.

Or how about the name of the group was smudged with blood? (So Arabelle wouldn't be able to read it)

Group's goal: to take over the country? Perhaps it is people who've always been on the lower rung, and want more?

In the group, we also have the common types; soldiers committed to the cause, mindless thugs...

Have you any idea for the name of the group? What is this group's goal? What kinds of people (other than the main leads) are in the group? Perhaps that would give insight into a possible name....

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

I think the first part was delegated to Louisa, since we decided to keep the pattern. If we did choose to write in that order, then I'd be doing the part where Arabelle meets with Wyatt.

Louisa....where are you?!?!?

Sorry I took too long to reply. I was watching home videos. *explains in the venting area*

Where were we, guys?

It's okay.

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter. This part is yours.

I need help with the letter. What's it going to say? And what's Saul's group name?

Miss Marsh,

Don't bother to clean up. After the same is done to you, we will take care of the mess. We figured, why do twice the work?

Signed,
Assemblage of _____ or a different name

Tourterelle wrote:

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

I think the first part was delegated to Louisa, since we decided to keep the pattern. If we did choose to write in that order, then I'd be doing the part where Arabelle meets with Wyatt.

Louisa....where are you?!?!?

Sorry I took too long to reply. I was watching home videos. *explains in the venting area*

Where were we, guys?

It's okay.

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter. This part is yours.

I need help with the letter. What's it going to say? And what's Saul's group name?

Louisa Lynn wrote:

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

I think the first part was delegated to Louisa, since we decided to keep the pattern. If we did choose to write in that order, then I'd be doing the part where Arabelle meets with Wyatt.

Louisa....where are you?!?!?

Sorry I took too long to reply. I was watching home videos. *explains in the venting area*

Where were we, guys?

It's okay.

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter. This part is yours.

Zara Sahana 007 wrote:

Tourterelle wrote:

Arabelle Marsh is going to wake up in Pearl's home. Later, she needs to open the letter, and she needs to meet with Wyatt.

I'm not sure who was writing this section, though, but it should probably be her waking up and opening the letter, then someone else can write Wyatt.

I think the first part was delegated to Louisa, since we decided to keep the pattern. If we did choose to write in that order, then I'd be doing the part where Arabelle meets with Wyatt.

Louisa....where are you?!?!?

Sorry I took too long to reply. I was watching home videos. *explains in the venting area*

Where were we, guys?