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Tourterelle
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Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
 | | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:05 am | |
| - Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Oh...I want to write the next part, after Louisa Lynn (I'll pick up with after wherever she decides to end).
Oh, if you think your writing is bad, you haven't seen mine. My earliest drafts look like utter crap. It isn't until the very end, after a LOT of revisions, when it finally looks like something remotely decent.
Anyways, Louisa, have fun! Can't wait to see how it turns out! I would hope I'm the same way (how it eventually becomes decent), but I can never judge my own writing. Tiskets is pretty cheesy; just a high-school angst story, but I was writing it out of passion. | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:04 am | |
| Anya Shaw: Fair, wispy blond hair and hazel eyes. Harsh, sharp, pointy features. Very skinny. Passionate about what she does and is convinced of Saul's cause. Adores and looks up to her brother, who treats her strictly, but secretly adores her. 16 years old. Nathan Shaw: Same hair/eyes/build as Anya; wiry, sharp, blond, etc. Treats Anya harsh to toughen her up, but secretly adores her. Very dedicated to Saul's cause. 18 years old. Wyatt Clay: Very light brown hair with soft curls. Big brown eyes. Falls for Arabelle. 18 years old. What do you guys' think of Anya's and Nathan's looks/attitudes? Also, what should we do for Wyatt's personality? I'm having a tough time thinking of a profile for him other than as Arabelle's lover. 
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| | | | Zara Mikazuki
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Number of posts : 4826
Age : 33
Location : The computer of the Biology Research Lab......procrastinating.
Dictionary Definition : Zara Sahana 007- Also known as "Zara," this abnormal specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens exhibits various bizarre behaviors. The most common of these include James Bond obsession, video game fever, and perhaps the strangest of all, a certain fondness for mathematics. Similar to other Homo Sapiens of the Literary Cabinet world, Zara Sahana 007 displays procrastination in brilliant forms, but will not admit to her oddball ways
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:02 am | |
| Oh...I want to write the next part, after Louisa Lynn (I'll pick up with after wherever she decides to end).
Oh, if you think your writing is bad, you haven't seen mine. My earliest drafts look like utter crap. It isn't until the very end, after a LOT of revisions, when it finally looks like something remotely decent.
Anyways, Louisa, have fun! Can't wait to see how it turns out! | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:58 am | |
| - Louisa Lynn wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Louisa Lynn wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Louisa Lynn wrote:
- I will. *raises hand eagerly* Sounds like fun. Pearl's sarcastic and witty, right?
Yes ma'am, she is. 
Have fun!
It may be a bit awful, but we'll edit it once it's done, right? After Pearl wakes her up, what happens next?
Oh, I'm sure it'll be good- mine was bad. Seriously, "January sky eyes." 
Perhaps they discuss the vision? Then, they should go to Arabelle's home and find her parents murdered, beheaded.
Should I write the murder part, too? Um, if you want to! Make the details of their severed heads gory. Meanwhile, I think I'll figure out what the minions look like...  | |
| | | | Louisa
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Number of posts : 6193
Age : 92
Dictionary Definition : Louisa Lynn--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that has almost everything in common with another species: Homo Sapiens Zarasahanous. This specimen is always found with Asian (Filipino) descent and is a loyal friend to the "good side" during the epic Choco War. A common mutualistic companion found with this specimen is a Pokemon (most likely, the epic Arceus). This species is closely related to the species Homo Sapiens Tourterelleous. Common names include Lynn's Angel.
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:57 am | |
| - Tourterelle wrote:
- Louisa Lynn wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Louisa Lynn wrote:
- I will. *raises hand eagerly* Sounds like fun. Pearl's sarcastic and witty, right?
Yes ma'am, she is.
Have fun!
It may be a bit awful, but we'll edit it once it's done, right? After Pearl wakes her up, what happens next?
Oh, I'm sure it'll be good- mine was bad. Seriously, "January sky eyes."
Perhaps they discuss the vision? Then, they should go to Arabelle's home and find her parents murdered, beheaded. Should I write the murder part, too? Or will I pass it to another person? | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:56 am | |
| - Louisa Lynn wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Louisa Lynn wrote:
- I will. *raises hand eagerly* Sounds like fun. Pearl's sarcastic and witty, right?
Yes ma'am, she is.
Have fun!
It may be a bit awful, but we'll edit it once it's done, right? After Pearl wakes her up, what happens next? Oh, I'm sure it'll be good- mine was bad. Seriously, "January sky eyes." Perhaps they discuss the vision? Then, they should go to Arabelle's home and find her parents murdered, beheaded. | |
| | | | Louisa
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Number of posts : 6193
Age : 92
Dictionary Definition : Louisa Lynn--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that has almost everything in common with another species: Homo Sapiens Zarasahanous. This specimen is always found with Asian (Filipino) descent and is a loyal friend to the "good side" during the epic Choco War. A common mutualistic companion found with this specimen is a Pokemon (most likely, the epic Arceus). This species is closely related to the species Homo Sapiens Tourterelleous. Common names include Lynn's Angel.
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:54 am | |
| - Tourterelle wrote:
- Louisa Lynn wrote:
- I will. *raises hand eagerly* Sounds like fun. Pearl's sarcastic and witty, right?
Yes ma'am, she is.
Have fun! It may be a bit awful, but we'll edit it once it's done, right? After Pearl wakes her up, what happens next? | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:53 am | |
| - Louisa Lynn wrote:
- I will. *raises hand eagerly* Sounds like fun. Pearl's sarcastic and witty, right?
Yes ma'am, she is. Have fun! | |
| | | | Louisa
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Number of posts : 6193
Age : 92
Dictionary Definition : Louisa Lynn--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that has almost everything in common with another species: Homo Sapiens Zarasahanous. This specimen is always found with Asian (Filipino) descent and is a loyal friend to the "good side" during the epic Choco War. A common mutualistic companion found with this specimen is a Pokemon (most likely, the epic Arceus). This species is closely related to the species Homo Sapiens Tourterelleous. Common names include Lynn's Angel.
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:50 am | |
| I will. *raises hand eagerly* Sounds like fun. Pearl's sarcastic and witty, right? | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:37 am | |
| Who wants to write next? It's Pearl waking her after the vision. | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:15 am | |
| - Louisa Lynn wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- I can start writing the dream after m if we work out exactly what she sees in that...vision? Dream?
What does she see Saul doing?
Maybe she had a vision of a young, neglected Saul. Okay, sounds good. | |
| | | | Louisa
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Number of posts : 6193
Age : 92
Dictionary Definition : Louisa Lynn--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that has almost everything in common with another species: Homo Sapiens Zarasahanous. This specimen is always found with Asian (Filipino) descent and is a loyal friend to the "good side" during the epic Choco War. A common mutualistic companion found with this specimen is a Pokemon (most likely, the epic Arceus). This species is closely related to the species Homo Sapiens Tourterelleous. Common names include Lynn's Angel.
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:12 am | |
| - Tourterelle wrote:
- I can start writing the dream after m if we work out exactly what she sees in that...vision? Dream?
What does she see Saul doing? Maybe she had a vision of a young, neglected Saul. | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:09 am | |
| I can start writing the dream after m if we work out exactly what she sees in that...vision? Dream?
What does she see Saul doing? | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:57 am | |
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| | | | Zara Mikazuki
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Number of posts : 4826
Age : 33
Location : The computer of the Biology Research Lab......procrastinating.
Dictionary Definition : Zara Sahana 007- Also known as "Zara," this abnormal specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens exhibits various bizarre behaviors. The most common of these include James Bond obsession, video game fever, and perhaps the strangest of all, a certain fondness for mathematics. Similar to other Homo Sapiens of the Literary Cabinet world, Zara Sahana 007 displays procrastination in brilliant forms, but will not admit to her oddball ways
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | | | | Zara Mikazuki
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Number of posts : 4826
Age : 33
Location : The computer of the Biology Research Lab......procrastinating.
Dictionary Definition : Zara Sahana 007- Also known as "Zara," this abnormal specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens exhibits various bizarre behaviors. The most common of these include James Bond obsession, video game fever, and perhaps the strangest of all, a certain fondness for mathematics. Similar to other Homo Sapiens of the Literary Cabinet world, Zara Sahana 007 displays procrastination in brilliant forms, but will not admit to her oddball ways
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:52 am | |
| - Tourterelle wrote:
- So, should we find out who writes what for the beginning, then?
And of course it doesn't have to be perfect right away: we can go through and edit later.
How long are we making this? Full fledged novel? A full fledged novel? That sounds like a lot of fun, but that would take a while to complete. Though, if we are committed to this long enough, we could pull it off! | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:44 am | |
| So, should we find out who writes what for the beginning, then? And of course it doesn't have to be perfect right away: we can go through and edit later. How long are we making this? Full fledged novel? | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
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| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:40 am | |
| - Louisa Lynn wrote:
- Hey, guys. I just read the conversations. It would do well as a story.
 Okay, I agree. | |
| | | | Louisa
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Number of posts : 6193
Age : 92
Dictionary Definition : Louisa Lynn--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that has almost everything in common with another species: Homo Sapiens Zarasahanous. This specimen is always found with Asian (Filipino) descent and is a loyal friend to the "good side" during the epic Choco War. A common mutualistic companion found with this specimen is a Pokemon (most likely, the epic Arceus). This species is closely related to the species Homo Sapiens Tourterelleous. Common names include Lynn's Angel.
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:39 am | |
| Hey, guys. I just read the conversations. It would do well as a story. | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:30 am | |
| - Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Since we've changed the setting, is that going to change the plot that we'd already put in place?
I don't think so; we'll just have the girls at a finishing school instead of a regular school, right?
That should be okay. Are there any other things we need to do before we actually start writing?
Nope, I don't think so.
We should probably come up with the personalities and looks of Saul's minions, but that can be done later.
Is this still manga, or are we doing a story now? 
Hmm...I don't know
I'm willing to go either way, but I remember Louisa Lynn telling us that this would read better as a story, instead of a manga. What's your opinion? I actually have changed my mind; a manga would be fun to do, but it might be too complicated. Plus, Louisa was the only one who said she could draw well, and we don't want to put all the pressure on her to draw, color, and scan each picture. And she's right: it might read better as a story. So, I vote story. What do you think, Zara? | |
| | | | Zara Mikazuki
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Number of posts : 4826
Age : 33
Location : The computer of the Biology Research Lab......procrastinating.
Dictionary Definition : Zara Sahana 007- Also known as "Zara," this abnormal specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens exhibits various bizarre behaviors. The most common of these include James Bond obsession, video game fever, and perhaps the strangest of all, a certain fondness for mathematics. Similar to other Homo Sapiens of the Literary Cabinet world, Zara Sahana 007 displays procrastination in brilliant forms, but will not admit to her oddball ways
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:23 am | |
| - Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Tourterelle wrote:
- Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Since we've changed the setting, is that going to change the plot that we'd already put in place?
I don't think so; we'll just have the girls at a finishing school instead of a regular school, right?
That should be okay. Are there any other things we need to do before we actually start writing? Nope, I don't think so. We should probably come up with the personalities and looks of Saul's minions, but that can be done later. Is this still manga, or are we doing a story now? | |
| | | | Zara Mikazuki
Guru
Number of posts : 4826
Age : 33
Location : The computer of the Biology Research Lab......procrastinating.
Dictionary Definition : Zara Sahana 007- Also known as "Zara," this abnormal specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens exhibits various bizarre behaviors. The most common of these include James Bond obsession, video game fever, and perhaps the strangest of all, a certain fondness for mathematics. Similar to other Homo Sapiens of the Literary Cabinet world, Zara Sahana 007 displays procrastination in brilliant forms, but will not admit to her oddball ways
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:20 am | |
| - Tourterelle wrote:
- Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Since we've changed the setting, is that going to change the plot that we'd already put in place?
I don't think so; we'll just have the girls at a finishing school instead of a regular school, right? That should be okay. Are there any other things we need to do before we actually start writing? | |
| | | | Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: The Story Thread: Discussion/Ideas Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:13 am | |
| - Zara Sahana 007 wrote:
- Since we've changed the setting, is that going to change the plot that we'd already put in place?
I don't think so; we'll just have the girls at a finishing school instead of a regular school, right? | |
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We can pull off anything!
You're right though; it will take a ton of time. I'm okay with that though.
It will be our pet project!