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Paul
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Number of posts : 3518
Location : Rhode Island, USA
Dictionary Definition : Dictionary Definition: Paul-One of the few male LC creatures known to exist, this specimen is one of the eldest in the LC universe. This specimen is known to work long hours but still makes time to commingle with fellow LC denizens. This being has a peculiar sense of humor and has been observed to shun smilies, although this aversion has been lessening as of late.
Registration date : 2009-02-06
 | | Subject: I just can't put this in "poems". Sat Jul 25, 2009 3:20 pm | |
| Well, I said I was going to write a humorous poem, and, unfortunately, I have.  I decided, however, not to sully the poems thread by including this with the sincere, quality works already there. I'm actually a bit embarrassed to post this here, in the jokes thread.  But, I said I would, and here it is: DATE GONE WRONGIt must have been the chili dogs I ate before this trip Because when I sat down the seat of my pants Resounded with a terrible rip. What am I to do now? To stand would be my disgrace Everybody will see my smiley-face underwear They will laugh right in my face. My date is looking at me She doesn't have a clue She tells me she is ready to leave What am I going to do? And now it's gotten much worse I think I'm going to die A buildup of gas deep within I gotta let one fly. A roiling in my guts My sphincter's feeling weak But in the middle of a coffee bar I can't do the one-cheek sneak. My date is getting angry She says it's time to go I have to do something With any luck she'll never know. I stand and push my chair back I gotta time it just so The loud squeal of wood against wood I close my eyes and let it go. A moment's hesitation Chair against floor, the sound didn't last Then like an avenging angel's trumpet The air ripped with my nether blast. The torn seat of my pants Blew out and flapped open wide In the ensuing silence My date's eyes were horrified. Now I spend my weekends alone And I write into my log Lesson one: before a date Say no to chili dogs. That's it. Sorry about that. It seems that ever since I read The Miller's Tale from Chaucer's Canturbury Tales I've had a taste for low-brow and puerile fare such as that. | |
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BeautyBlitz
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Number of posts : 1882
Age : 41
Location : Canada
Dictionary Definition : Rodent - Homo Rodentiensis is a typical LC creature. Always ready to laugh about stupidity, this being has long occupied a special moderator status on the LC. As one of the very few LC creatures who actually can get and keep a partner, she is the object of constant envy. Though madness is not part of the average Rodents characteristics, this particular feature can at times be subject to change, especially when striken by severe sleep deprivation.
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Registration date : 2008-12-02
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:09 pm | |
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Kelsey
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Number of posts : 2780
Dictionary Definition : Kelsey-- Frequently called "Kels," this female specimen of Homo Sapiens belongs to the Literary Cabinet universe. Although she is a young member, she has shown her maturity to be above other species, sometimes. "Kelsey" can behave quite crazy in her own right. One of her most noticeable traits is paranoia and knowledge of trolls.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:36 pm | |
| I really hope, for your sake, this isn't based on a past experience. | |
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Paul
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Number of posts : 3518
Location : Rhode Island, USA
Dictionary Definition : Dictionary Definition: Paul-One of the few male LC creatures known to exist, this specimen is one of the eldest in the LC universe. This specimen is known to work long hours but still makes time to commingle with fellow LC denizens. This being has a peculiar sense of humor and has been observed to shun smilies, although this aversion has been lessening as of late.
Registration date : 2009-02-06
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:56 pm | |
| To Mariah: Thank you! Yes, as "refined" (yeah, right!  ) as I sometimes try to appear, a good fart joke (like Jurassic Fart!) will still make me LMAO (which I am guessing stand for Laugh My Ass Off). What can I say? To Kelsey: Thankfully, this is not based on past experience! | |
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Tourterelle
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Number of posts : 7942
Age : 31
Location : Wisconsin, USA
Dictionary Definition : Tourterelle--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that exhibits behaviors such as excessive procrastination, chocolate creation (in direct contradiction to the Law of Conservation of Matter), and overall insanity. Common names include Nicholle, CQ (Chocolate Queen), Crackhead, and Miss Martini Maniac. Lately, this individual has reportedly been seen dancing in a banana costume and drinking an excessive amount of martinis.
Registration date : 2008-12-03
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Sun Jul 26, 2009 2:11 am | |
| That's hilarious, Paul!
Absolutely disgusting, but still funny. | |
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Louisa
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Number of posts : 6193
Age : 92
Dictionary Definition : Louisa Lynn--a unique specimen of the female gender of Homo Sapiens that has almost everything in common with another species: Homo Sapiens Zarasahanous. This specimen is always found with Asian (Filipino) descent and is a loyal friend to the "good side" during the epic Choco War. A common mutualistic companion found with this specimen is a Pokemon (most likely, the epic Arceus). This species is closely related to the species Homo Sapiens Tourterelleous. Common names include Lynn's Angel.
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:15 pm | |
| I knew I'd laugh out loud! Absolutely brilliant, Paul!  | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Mon Aug 10, 2009 12:34 pm | |
| As usual, I'm finding this one late.
My take?
Gross, vulgar, and f-ing hilarious.
Epic, Paul! |
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March Hare
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Number of posts : 207
Registration date : 2008-12-04
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Wed Aug 12, 2009 12:46 pm | |
| I was on the floor. You should send this to the NYT.
It's the type of poem one is ashamed to laugh at, though. | |
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Jen
Aspiring newbie
Number of posts : 117
Age : 38
Location : USA
Registration date : 2010-08-10
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Thu Aug 12, 2010 7:12 pm | |
| Wow.  | |
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Paul
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Number of posts : 3518
Location : Rhode Island, USA
Dictionary Definition : Dictionary Definition: Paul-One of the few male LC creatures known to exist, this specimen is one of the eldest in the LC universe. This specimen is known to work long hours but still makes time to commingle with fellow LC denizens. This being has a peculiar sense of humor and has been observed to shun smilies, although this aversion has been lessening as of late.
Registration date : 2009-02-06
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Thu Aug 12, 2010 9:23 pm | |
| Just when I thought this one was dead and buried and forgotten about... I'm glad you got a laugh out of it, though, Jen!  | |
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Jen
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Number of posts : 117
Age : 38
Location : USA
Registration date : 2010-08-10
| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Thu Aug 12, 2010 10:18 pm | |
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Yeah it was very funny. For your sake I was hoping it wasn't based on experience. I laughed pretty hard. Great job, by the way.
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| | Subject: Re: I just can't put this in "poems". Sat Aug 14, 2010 12:38 pm | |
| Yep. That really was very funny. |
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